Thursday, March 20, 2014

Ill Advised Moment

Pain of a Pane


            It was a peaceful spring day. I had just gotten on break, the family was home, and all was fine. I went outside to enjoy the wonderful spring day. The breeze was fluttering and bringing the sweet smells of the east. I had a bounce back; a contraption designed to pass against. I was far too lazy to remove this from the wall of the house right under the windowsill. So I proceeded to pass. I went for a while, without any error or mishaps. The dogs were frolicking with me in the backyard, the two trees we had planted flowing with the wind. The air smelled of sweet spring air. The day was fantastic.
           
            Suddenly, the notion that I should just take one shot passed through my head. “You need the practice; after all you do have a lacrosse game coming up.” I thought to myself. I had toyed with the notion for about half an hour. I finally decided to go for the shot, after all what’s the worst that could happen?  I set my feet, lined up my shot and ripped the twine as hard as I was able. The ball traveling at high velocity, I could see in slow motions. I saw the spin forwards, every rotation nearing closer to the net of the bounce back. But wait, something had gone wrong. The smile on my face quickly turned to a frown; the ball clipped the top of the net slipping through the hole in between the net and the crossbar. Approaching the seamless wall of glass. Shattering the barrier with no effort, and denting the secondary pane. The glass making the sound of a thousand chimes at once.

             My father, surprised, came outside to access the situation. His anger surpassed the point of description. His anger was at the point of he was unable to speak. “ADAM!” I scurried inside with my tail in between my legs as to not allot more anger to myself. All I could think about is why, why had I not thought before I acted? I mean actually thought, not just think should or shouldn't like outweigh facts.

“This is going to take at least a week to repair,” my Father said. Slowly descending from ultimate anger to the realm of reasoning. He still looked like he wanted to smack me, but not as bad as before. He then moved his gaze from me to the window, and then back to me, “…So how do you suppose we pay for this? Maybe your pocket is what it should come out of, not mine.” He stated in a clear calculated voice. This was it, every kid’s nightmare. You have to give up all of your money for games and snacks. Not only that but I had to give him 2 birthdays in advance of money. I didn't get allowance so there was really no other way.


            Moral of the story: think before you act. Especially if you’re around windows. Or as stupid as me. Definitely if you’re as stupid as me.

I think i did a good job on describing the action itself. I really took time and slowed it down to revolve around the moment.Also i think portrayed my dad's mood pretty well. He was beyond mad.